Blog Reflection

What I am most proud of with my blogs is how i came up with all different stories. In a few of the blogs I picked stuff that I was actually interested in and connected it with what we were learning in class. I think that on my future blogs I could improve on expanding and adding more detail to what I'm writing. I need to use more "show instead of tell" writing so the reader can visualize what I am saying. I think a way that we can better connect our blogs would be to add more pictures, videos and relate them to other classmates blogs. I think that we can look at our peers blogs and pick one that connects with ours. That might also help us learn more about what we are blogging on, and give us different perspectives of the situation.